Exam practice question - answer
Roosevelt once said: “We have nothing to fear, but fear itself.” Using the novel as a whole, judge the ways in which this quote pertains to life on the island for the boys.
Thesis: If the boys would not have feared so many things they would have fonction better (with fewer conflicts) as a mini-civilization
- Losing power
- Jack
- Ralph
- Beast
- Parachute
- Simon’s death
- Death
- Fire → keeping it alive
- Hunters → afraid of starvation
Mme’s comments: thesis could be reworded, but arguments are really good
Thesis: The quote “We have nothing to fear, but fear itself” pertains to the boys life on the island as fear causes erratic behaviours which puts them in dangerous situations.
- Jack’s fear of losing power
- kills piggy
- almost burns down the island and kills ralph
- Fear of the fire going out
- Ralph’s “freak out” (p.111)
- Hunters let fire go out on mountain
- Fear of the Beast
- Makes Ralph question himself
- Kills Simon
Thesis: The boys in Lord of the Flies had much more to fear than fear itself considering the very real dangers they were exposed to throughout the book
- The boys had trouble meeting their foundamental needs
- Maintaining a fire
- Littluns access to food
- Hunting/shelter building/heat...
- Corruption within the group
- Roger’s cruelty (littluns, Henry, …)
- Jack abusing his power, abusing SamnEric
- Consequences of anarchy/bad leadership
- Ralph getting hunted
- Moral disengagement (Simon’s death)
Other example of a good thesis: Hysteria shortly becomes the source of chaos as the characters learn that they need to fend for themselves